Here are three different dialogue ideas I created for the second page of my comic.
Each one shows a different emotion — fear, surprise, or mystery.
The boy and his father are reacting to a huge event as a powerful monster appears.
I’m still thinking about which one fits the scene best!
Which one do you think works best for this moment?
Speech Bubble Option 1: Suspenseful & Dramatic
Boy: Something is happening.
Dad: A big thing is coming.
Dad: This can’t be happening...
Speech Bubble Option 2: Mystery & Revelation
Boy: Dad, what is going on?
Dad: I’ve seen this before... it’s...
Dad: The Dark Element!!
Speech Bubble Option 3: Shock & Warning
Boy: Wow! What was that boom?
Dad: That can’t be a good sign, son.
Dad: Holy God!!
Again look at others work and really research so that you have examples and a more in-depth understanding of this for your own work
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